
An experimental poem
Yesterday evening, I asked my mother sitting besides me and sipping her tea, to share a few random words that came to her mind.
These are what she shared in the same order as she shared.
Time, Eternal, Free, Freedom, Connection, Heart, Destiny, Love, Emerging, Twinkle, Abundance, Garnering, Gather, Depth, Stardust, Voyage Spirit
Here is what I imagined in the dance of these words…
When Love is Destiny
Emerging in eternal time
Destiny twinkles on stardust
Garnering connections of hearts
Voyaging free in the spirit of freedom.
Gathering abundance in the
depth of love.
©Savvy Raj
February 23, 2024 at 9:29 am
Very clever wordplay, Savvy. You turned it into a very lovely piece of work. 😊
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February 23, 2024 at 10:10 am
Thank you Kevin for appreciating…😊
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February 23, 2024 at 10:31 am
Wonderful Starlit Words By Your Mother
To Meditate With in Contemplation Dear
Savvy After All is Danced And Sung
We Come From Star Dust Crucible
Fires of Star Death in Super
Nova Explosions
Molecules And Atoms
We aRe From Star Systems
Before Still Arising in the Iron of Our
Blood Streams Picked Up By Oxygen Delivered
By Life Giving Trees All Is Connected in Star Dust
With SMiLes As Carl Sagan Relates Star Stuff We aRe
Cosmos
Unto Itself
Reflecting We
Continue to Spread
The Love of Just Existing
To BREaTHE A New Day’s Dream…
As Both Star FLoWeRS From Star Seeds
We Come
to
Be
Free..:)
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February 23, 2024 at 7:30 pm
your mum’s choice of words are to be commended, Savvy….and you weaved a wonder from them so very nicely 🤍✨
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February 23, 2024 at 8:42 pm
I just read your comment to her . And we thank you together for your kind words.💕
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February 24, 2024 at 10:07 am
my pleasure 🤍
sorry for the late response, didn’t receive a notification for this✨
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February 24, 2024 at 6:51 pm
Much love 💕
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February 24, 2024 at 6:51 pm
🤗🤍✨
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