Savvy Raj

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A free flow…

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An experimental poem

Yesterday evening, I asked my mother sitting besides me and sipping her tea, to share a few random words that came to her mind.

These are what she shared in the same order as she shared.

Time, Eternal, Free, Freedom, Connection, Heart, Destiny, Love, Emerging, Twinkle, Abundance, Garnering, Gather, Depth, Stardust, Voyage Spirit

Here is what I imagined in the dance of these words…

When Love is Destiny

Emerging in eternal time
Destiny twinkles on stardust
Garnering connections of  hearts
Voyaging free in the spirit of freedom.
Gathering abundance in the
depth of love.

©Savvy Raj

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Author: Savvy Raj

Dance Educator, Writer, Artist, Designer, Wellness Mentor & Consultant

8 thoughts on “A free flow…

  1. Kevin's avatar

    Very clever wordplay, Savvy. You turned it into a very lovely piece of work. 😊

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  2. katiemiafrederick's avatar

    Wonderful Starlit Words By Your Mother
    To Meditate With in Contemplation Dear

    Savvy After All is Danced And Sung

    We Come From Star Dust Crucible

    Fires of Star Death in Super

    Nova Explosions

    Molecules And Atoms
    We aRe From Star Systems

    Before Still Arising in the Iron of Our
    Blood Streams Picked Up By Oxygen Delivered

    By Life Giving Trees All Is Connected in Star Dust

    With SMiLes As Carl Sagan Relates Star Stuff We aRe

    Cosmos

    Unto Itself

    Reflecting We
    Continue to Spread
    The Love of Just Existing
    To BREaTHE A New Day’s Dream…

    As Both Star FLoWeRS From Star Seeds
    We Come

    to

    Be
    Free..:)

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  3. destiny's avatar

    your mum’s choice of words are to be commended, Savvy….and you weaved a wonder from them so very nicely 🤍✨

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  4. Savvy Raj's avatar

    I just read your comment to her . And we thank you together for your kind words.💕

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