
Serendipitous dawn
Across emerald waters
Spiraling sun shines
Balancing my breath
On soft sandy shores
Ocean mist fills my senses.
P.S :
The Vision & verse…
A bit on writing this poem.
I choose an open structure with just a light punctuation such that the lines flow into one another and can be interpreted creatively. I recognize it is a natural way for me to write.
I remembered a day where simply walking on such a peaceful eastern shore, I felt the shifting energy bring balance in my being. There was just me the sky and the ocean, today I have tried to envision that lived moment, that presence I felt in the white sands and whiffs of ocean mist in just these six lines of verse.
Savvy
(The Ai photo image is simply my prompted visual representation of a lived moment.)
September 9, 2026 at 5:06 pm
very nice lines, Savvy ji!!
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September 9, 2026 at 7:21 pm
Thank you Aniruddha 🙏
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September 9, 2026 at 8:37 pm
Nice poem Savvy
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September 10, 2026 at 8:33 am
Thank you my friend.
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September 10, 2026 at 8:54 am
You’re welcome my friend
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September 10, 2026 at 3:33 am
One with Sugar
White Sands Emerald
Green Waves Sea Oats
Swaying
in Breeze
Sea Gull Wings
Spiraling Around Sun
For me Dear Savvy
Distance
From Hell
To Heaven
For Real
Being
Beach
All Places Now
Breath Takes me Free
Within Inside Outside
Above So Below All Around
New
i
am..:)
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September 10, 2026 at 4:47 pm
Yes somerimes memories make us go places in a moment and renews us from where we are…
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September 11, 2026 at 1:17 am
☺️🙏
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