Savvy Raj

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Balancing the breath

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Serendipitous dawn
Across emerald waters
Spiraling sun shines
Balancing my breath
On soft sandy shores
Ocean mist fills my senses.

P.S :

The Vision & verse…

A bit on writing this poem.

I choose an open structure  with just a light punctuation such that the lines flow into one another and can be interpreted creatively.  I recognize it is a natural way for me to write.

I remembered a day where simply walking on such a  peaceful eastern shore, I felt the shifting energy bring balance in my being. There was just me the sky  and the ocean, today I have tried to envision that lived moment, that presence I felt in the white sands and whiffs of ocean mist in just these six lines of verse. 

Savvy

(The Ai photo image is simply  my prompted  visual  representation of a lived moment.)


 

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Author: Savvy Raj

Dance Educator, Writer, Artist, Designer, Wellness Mentor & Consultant

8 thoughts on “Balancing the breath”

  1. Aniruddhaa Kaul's avatar

    very nice lines, Savvy ji!!

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  2. katiemiafrederick's avatar

    One with Sugar
    White Sands Emerald
    Green Waves Sea Oats

    Swaying

    in Breeze

    Sea Gull Wings

    Spiraling Around Sun

    For me Dear Savvy

    Distance

    From Hell

    To Heaven

    For Real

    Being

    Beach

    All Places Now
    Breath Takes me Free
    Within Inside Outside
    Above So Below All Around

    New

    i
    am..:)

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