
Has the fire died in me?
I ask, looking at the mirror
The mirror answered
Look again dear,
Perhaps you have missed
The simmering coal in your gaze
Like molten magma…
Perhaps tears you cried
haven’t dried as yet
Misting the view.
Am just a mirror dear
A reflection at best
But even a mirror cannot miss
The smoldering eyes of passion
The demeanor that speaks
Of resilience no matter
The ravages of time.
Yet the warrior in you burning bright.
The scars etched on your face
Are a testament of times
Of standing tall in adversity
As the storms passed by.
You ask, “Is the fire in you gone “
I say, I see them in all of you …
In your face and stance.
In all of your body, spirit and soul.
Speaking with all of you.
The fight is not over
As the day is not done.
I saw this line ‘the fire has died ‘ and I was inspired to write this poem.
Your thoughts are welcome .
Savvy Raj
February 12, 2025 at 12:23 pm
Seeing Deeper Now
Than SKiN Deep Dear
Savvy Indeed FlaMe
in the Mirror
That
Who
Lives
Breathes
Beats Within
SPiRiT Radiating
From OpeN HeARTS
Living Life or PaSSinG Away
From What Once Moves Connects
Co-Creates
Together
More Soul
To A Place
in the Mirror Free
That is No Longer HoMe..:)
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February 13, 2025 at 1:12 pm
Wonderful words🙏
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February 14, 2025 at 12:41 am
Thanks for
Your inspiring
Verse☺️🙏
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February 14, 2025 at 4:35 pm
🙏
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February 13, 2025 at 7:39 am
Well expressed the hidden emotions. Savvy.
The fire never dies. Like a dorment valcono it remains passive in the passage of time. When ignited it erupts with full force. Care should be taken that it erupts to brighten the self and the surroundings, not the other way.
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February 13, 2025 at 1:11 pm
Beautiful thoughts ❤️
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